Reborn Lyrics

This is my first tab. please rate.
TAB LEGEND:
*= palm mute
//= tremelo
/= slide
(Both Guitars)
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[-3333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5----------333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5-
[-3333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3----------333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3-
[-3333--------333-4-7-333--------33377766-333--------333-4-7-333--------
-7-9---7-7------]
(Guitar 2}
(picked faster than guitar 1) played more silent then guitar 1
(Both Guitars)
(this part i very low so im not quit sure if its the right sound)
(INTRO PART)
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[-3333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5----------333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5-
[-3333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3----------333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3-
[-3333--------333-4-7-333--------33377766-333--------333-4-7-333--------
-7-9---7-7------]
(Guitar 2}
(picked faster than guitar 1) A LITTLE BIT LOUDER
(Both Guitars)
(CHORUS)
(INTRO PART)
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[-3333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5----------333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5-
[-3333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3----------333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3-
[-3333--------333-4-7-333--------33377766-333--------333-4-7-333--------
-7-9---7-7------]
(BOTH GUITARS)
(CHORUS)
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[-3333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5----------333-5p(3)5-333-4-7-333-5p(3)5-
[-3333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3----------333-3p(3)3-333-4-7-333-3p(3)3-
[-3333--------333-4-7-333--------33377766-333--------333-4-7-333--------
-7-9---7-7------]