My Day Lyrics

This is my first song that I've transposed so any suggestions are helpfully.
Let me know what you think.
Technique: p = pull off, ~ = hold note, * = single strum
Chords: G C Em D Dsus4 G5 C5 E5 D5
Intro (Play Twice)
e---0~~~~|---0~~~~|---------|--------|
B--------|--------|---3~~---|--------|
G--0-----|--0-----|--0---4p2|~~~~~~~~|
Like a lotus flower growing in the dirt
Ain't nobody ever noticed what its worth
Til the sun shines and the rain falls and
In no time it all is beautiful
This is my day, this is my day
Ohhhh, wont let it slip away
Oh, I'm waiting for these changes to say, this is my
day
e---0~~~~|---0~~~~|---------|--------|
B--------|--------|---3~~---|--------|
G--0-----|--0-----|--0---4p2|~~~~~~~~|
There's a voice inside that's trying to be heard, hmmm
And its echoing across the universe
If you listen it'll lead you to that place you've always been running to
This is my day, this is my day
Ohhhh, wont let it slip away
Oh, I'm waiting for these changes to say, this is my day
I always saw it coming
A little light behind the clouds
This is the start of something
My heart believes it now
This is my day, this is my day
Ohhh, wont let it slip away
Oh, this is my day, this is my day
Ohhhh, wont let it slip away
Oh, I'm waiting for these changes to say, this is my
day ohhh my day
e---0~~~~|---0~~~~|---------|--------|---0~~~~|---0~~~~|---------|--------|
B--------|--------|---3~~---|--------|--------|--------|---3~~---|--------|
G--0-----|--0-----|--0---4p2|~~~~~~~~|--0-----|--0-----|--0---4p2|~~~~~~~~|
Like a lotus flower growing in the dirt