Unknown Soldier Lyrics

I have already tabbed this song once,
but since then, I have found some errors in it.
The original tab still sounds good the way it is,
but this one is exactly the way the song sounds...
at least to me! So here is my new and improved version
of "Unknown Soldier." Please RATE and COMMENT!
(Capo 1)
Intro:
Verse 1:
Border line, dead inside
I don't mind falling to pieces
Count me in, violent
Let's begin feeding the sickness
How do I simplify
Dislocate, the enemy's on the way
Chorus 1:
Show me what it's like
To dream in black and white
D A G (pause 2 sec.)
So I can leave this world tonight
(Repeat intro: G Bm A G Bm A)
Verse 2:
Full of fear, everclear
I'll be here, fighting forever
Curious, venemous
You'll find me climbing to Heaven
Nevermind, turn back time
You'll be fine, I will get left behind
Chorus 2:
Show me what it's like
To dream in black and white
So I can leave this world tonight
Holding on too tight
Breath the breath of life
So I can leave this world behind
Bridge:
It only hurts just once
They're only broken bones
Hide the hate inside
OHH!!!
Solo:
(So I can leave this world behind)
Chorus 2:
Show me what it's like
To dream in black and white
So I can leave this world tonight
Holding on too tight
Breath the breath of life
So I can leave this world behind
(End on D)