Drowning Lyrics

Hi guys! in this tab Im going to try to explain some ways to play this nice song called Drowning.
First the "original" version with Drop C# and then a standard tunning version,
wich can be played acustic with chords
the original version is in C#m, and the standard in Em
tell me if there is a mistake plz ;)
each "-" = semiquaver, so we have 16 - per compas (4/4)
m: minim
c: crotchet
q: quaver
q.: quaver with.
s: semiquaver
intro twice
D#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
A#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
F#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
C#|5-5-5-5-5-5-x-0-|--0-0-0-0-0-0-0-|8---8--x7-8---5-|--5-5-5-5-5-5-5-|
G#|5-5-5-5-5-5-x-0-|--0-0-0-0-0-0-0-|8---8--x7-8---5-|--5-5-5-5-5-5-5-|
C#|5-5-5-5-5-5-x-0-|--0-0-0-0-0-0-0-|8---8--x7-8---5-|--5-5-5-5-5-5-5-|
q q q q q q q c | q q q q q q q |c q. sq c c q q q q q q q |
| |_or q, with rest
You can play this note as f#5 too
verse1 twice
D#|----------------|----5-----------|----------------|----------------|
A#|--65-65-65-65---|-56---65-65-65--|--65-65-65-65---|--------8---6---|
F#|7---------------|----------------|7---------------|5---------------|
C#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
G#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
C#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
q sq sq sq sq | sq q sq sq sq |q sq sq sq sq |m c c |
chorus play the same as intro, three times
verse2 play the same as verse1, three times
verse3 twice
D#|----5-----------|7-----5-------5-|----5-----------|----------------|
A#|----------8-----|------------8---|----------8-----|6-----4---------|
F#|7-------7-----7-|----7-----7-----|7-------7-----7-|----7-----7-5-7-|
C#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
G#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
C#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
c c q c q |c q c q q q c c q c q c q c q q q
or
D#|----------------|7---------------|----------------|----------------|
A#|----10-----8----|------10----8-10|----10----8-----|----------------|
F#|7--------7----7-|----7-----7-----|7-------7-----7-|10--7-9---7-5-7-|
C#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
G#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
C#|----------------|----------------|----------------|----------------|
ending... disappearing ;)
D#|-----------...
A#|--65-65-65-...
F#|7----------...
C#|-----------...
G#|-----------...
C#|-----------...